Finally Vinyl Stickered My X
#20
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I like where you're going with the design... subtle and unique. I think you're going with a modern, technical design with a sense of rally/speed. The front hood design is good: simple and interesting without overdoing it and covering the entire hood. Unfortunately, the sides are where it gets a bit cluttered. The circuit board and lines definitely don't belong, as it stands out too much and doesn't blend in well. The splash marks could vary in width and strokes. It should start progressively low in the front side skirt and increase in intensity towards the rear. Clean up a bit of the hexagons too; sparse is better.
Also, I second one of the guys above and say that you shouldn't pimp the Cobb logo, especially on the back since it looks cluttered and too tight, unless you are being sponsored or have some relation with them other than consumer/manufacturer.
I'm just trying to be helpful from a fellow artist's perspective, so don't take my criticisms harshly. I say stick with it!
Also, I second one of the guys above and say that you shouldn't pimp the Cobb logo, especially on the back since it looks cluttered and too tight, unless you are being sponsored or have some relation with them other than consumer/manufacturer.
I'm just trying to be helpful from a fellow artist's perspective, so don't take my criticisms harshly. I say stick with it!