Have the muffler rotated so the tip exits the top and not the bottom. Then you possibly have a winner. I have to agree with everyone that it looks "bulky" though. Power and sound are the most important anyway. Looks are a close 3rd.

 

shiny mufflers suck. To each their own though

 

It's fitting if the driver goes around with some blinking chains around his hip, baggy pants to show the underwear, and gigantic "faux" diamond earings.

 

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i'm sorry- i didn't read your original post carefully enough. i bet it sounds pretty nice actually.